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e11even · 10-01-2015, 05:23 AM

Jigga mah nigma- I was floating through this wonderful maze of language. This is the more refined venture I usually embark on when I attempt to write, but this wasn't any attempt of mine. You did exceptionally well with Picasso-ing a Poe-ish piece and it was almost like a more drawn out version of his likeness. Some rhymes felt a little off on ends, but it barely blemished the whole of this work. Good job.

Mayjah razah- this piece felt how I feel when I'm in my moods. This was nice and pretty neatly worded. Toward the end (last three lines) it simplified... I'm guessing for closing purposes, but I liked the appetizer silhouette metaphor pairs and phrasing in the beginning. I don't know you nor have I seen your work, but I think I'll like more of what you do in the future. Good job bro.

I liked both. NIGMA had the VividlyVague thing going on and razah tailored more to the real world me. For ease and relatability (although relation to the subject was lesser) MVGT RAZAH

10-01-2015, 05:23 AM	#10
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Jigga mah nigma- I was floating through this wonderful maze of language. This is the more refined venture I usually embark on when I attempt to write, but this wasn't any attempt of mine. You did exceptionally well with Picasso-ing a Poe-ish piece and it was almost like a more drawn out version of his likeness. Some rhymes felt a little off on ends, but it barely blemished the whole of this work. Good job. Mayjah razah- this piece felt how I feel when I'm in my moods. This was nice and pretty neatly worded. Toward the end (last three lines) it simplified... I'm guessing for closing purposes, but I liked the appetizer silhouette metaphor pairs and phrasing in the beginning. I don't know you nor have I seen your work, but I think I'll like more of what you do in the future. Good job bro. I liked both. NIGMA had the VividlyVague thing going on and razah tailored more to the real world me. For ease and relatability (although relation to the subject was lesser) MVGT RAZAH __________________ Ahem.