[Frank]

MVGT sral

Boiled down to ultimately the more clever concept. Destroyer, a repetitive theme throughout the poem almost edged it for you. It became harmonic. Where you lost the edge is the Super dome angle. Played out. Although it was a natural disaster, and you could very well have lost loved ones in it, it just wasn't the right disastrous event to summarize your first 2 stanzas. Sral - I always feel it is the opponents job to snatch victory from the jaws of defeat. It isn't your match to win, it is your opponents match to lose. Just my philosophy. Though not as poetic per say as Destroyer. A spoken word piece inside a booth, that happens to be a confession booth. Mechanics start to finish all the way to the punchline finale