This was pretty one sided in my eyes. MMLP came with thought invested into his concept and delivered a pretty cool verse. Thought it was mechanically sound, and although there was limited escalation you took a clean angle at the topic. 2000, you are getting better mechanically but still are behind conceptually which is much more important in my opinion. You were talking about too many things, you have to focus more on talking about one thing and building on it.
For the more developed and better executed and enjoyable verse for me,
+1 MMLP
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