Not bad but I thought you lost it towards the end...I love the rhyme scheme and the flow...what I miss about netcees so much is it is actually rap...rr was nothing but topicals with 20 syllable lines and I wasn't feeling it at all...seemed like it was a flex and I liked it a lot...really no qualms with anything particular just the end tbh...I understood where I were going just thought it took too long to execute it
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