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Old 09-29-2015, 10:06 PM   #13
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SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: Destroyer vs fraze

Destroyer: This was a very uneven verse. Most of the punches were fairly simple; the Encino Man bar was good, although I've seen similar concepts before. Your execution wasn't outstanding, but was effectively aggressive. I just wasn't feeling a lot of your material here. Final Score: 10/20

Fraze: This verse was even less consistent than Destroyer's. The first few lines were just uncreative insults, but then you picked up the pace. The Battleship line was excellent. The skating line and Ray Allen line were just "meh." I sense that you weren't exerting yourself when writing this verse. Final Score: 10/20

Final Thoughts: I got the same vibe from both verses: high ups and low downs. Fraze had the bar of the battle, but Destroyer had slightly more good material. This could go either way, but I have my winner.

Destroyer gets my vote over Fraze (10 - 10)
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