Man this was a dope fucking battle.
I got destroyer taking this.
Fuck man lars you did your thing and i loved your flow as usual man
You got to be the smoothest writer ive seen on these boards. Great story
Great pace and diction. Good imagery through out sprinkled with your
Signiture phrasing and wording. Really enjoyed this my dude but if im
Honest i think im more fond of last weeks piece.
Des
This was dope. You have a real knack for the short line style
Keep using it. You seem to manage to say so much with such
Little spacs lol. I think thats why i like your writing. Not to much
Abstract element in your writing and you play it safe most of the
Time but you have this unique style that is developing very nicely
Man. Ok so i loved the sequence to this. You wrote in steps kind of
Like thr stigmata shit lol. I thought that was cool. Enjoyec how u
Covered three aspect and molded one story out of it all.
Man this N ill battle and props to both of you and thanks for the read
I got destroyer though. I dont knos what it is about his piece but it keeps
Drawing me in. Im diggin the sequence and the language he used. Very
Blunt but precise and poetic.
Enjoyed
Destroyer
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