Cimmerian - A charming quarter. Even though it's not a quartet. Cool conceptual writing and a nice flow to go along with it. An oldschool, CYNE type of feel with traditional lyrical vibes. Overall, tight.
Lars - You integrated some complexity into this piece, in reference to the underlying metaphor about vultures in music culture regurgitating content and spinning it as original. Not an innovative idea in itself, but you did it with merit. The rhyming was stellar, as was the pacing.
I'm voting for Cimm here. His verse was a little more refreshing and less congested. Good match!
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