[Meth]

Originally Posted by puravida

@Spoken

Spoke's bitch love me, He ain't pleasin' so I'll make her leave him with no say or reason
I offered her some business, she shooked on it and we both came to an agreement.
--too statemtnish for me bro, not bad or good just there
It's D-Day - voters mind your own, or else expect his Brains in the brief case,
spokane get crossed like US 395, no washington state free ways.
--eh/ok
handing this sonnin to u like pissed off Obstetricians; the delivery is mean,
I'm new to the lime but whatever I body, is goundbreaking like I'm Timothy Green.
--ok
Bring back up? I'll shoot u kids with gun play till both are impaired quick,
or 1 footlong bullet can get rid of spokeman quicker than subway did to jared
--cool
I'll set the alarm with this fire, prepare for this coffin, when there's smoke in the room,
not celebrating early or counting chickens before they hatch but netcees spoke out, too soon
--wording was poor, but good concept quality bar, could have been A+ but u left it at a B-
This storyteller needs to go somewhere else. Don't fix it, if it aint broken, nerd
No Campsite Poetry Jam; when I roast nuts n open fire on spoken.....word
--nah

Originally Posted by Spoken

@purivada @Hush

You a hot boi? Stop. U prolly a "shuffle paper in a cubicle" nerd,
Only time they want purifier is if someone wants hot water at work.
--wording is weak on this, good concept ok opener/hit
Get off the molly. U aint bout that hard life, matter off fact swerve,
I mean u force ur persona like ur concepts, worse than ladies at birth.
--the wp doesnt work for me. seems forced, maybe its just me tho idk
Lets get to work, pull the blades to start carving ya sides,
Ill remove everything but we'd still see a bitch in you when we look in ur eyes.
--solid
Im loyal to my team. Quick to let the techs burst against phonies,
Open and pour so many cans at one time.. im steve austin to the homies.
--no sting here. cool bar, but not really a punch
Left hooks to the body N' let the right swing once u sleep on it partner,
Its plane simple. Ill have these bombs drop u like the attack on pearl harbor.
--not really digging a plane/plain play honestly man
Ill stop by ur work and let the knife go without being cautious,
Have ur dinner turn cold and wife upset. For the last time ur getting stuck at the office.
--this is dope. could have been worded better but still good regardless

Toe tagged!!!

cool battle props guys.

had it 2-2 on quotes

spoken had some bad misses to me imo

pur with the more consistent verses and W

V/ Puravida