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Old 09-24-2015, 11:12 PM   #15
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Each verse had a poetical vibe which is something I enjoy. This is a solid battle because you two went a similar route with the topic. You each had a war theme to it, so no real points for original take on topic I guess. Enjoyed each flow but did notice some errors in eth verse. I think that while spoken gave a stronger emotional connection in the verse, his verse was also harder to follow in comparison. I liked the brutality of Eth, a child not freed, held onto for death.

So....Again, not the most original given the topic, and this is a nit picking vote because I really did enjoy each read damn near equally on a very high level. In fact, I have read half of the verses this week and these are my two favorites. Anyways

V/ Eth slightly, very close, extremely enjoyable, dope shit point blank.
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