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Old 09-24-2015, 11:02 PM   #13
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Yes indeed Mr. J


Closing vote here


Mr. J wrote a solid read about death, visually charged and solid imagery. Rhyme wise, on par with Frank, which is to say, not very complex, but they worked. Frank had a shock value story that I would do not wish to read again.

V/J

better story
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