NYC - I actually burst out laughing at "go to a bar and play darts nigga". That is all.
Godcomplex - One thing I said to Nigma too, try to avoid having a rhyme scheme last only 3 rhymes. Because basically in this text shit our minds perceive a bar as two lines, when a scheme lasts 3 it's almost like it's shot out of the sky when you switch it on the fourth. Interesting in doing a letter from the heart to the girl. I actually really didn't pick up on that in the early moments but it all came together what you meant at the end (similar to what I was talking to you in PMs about). Being able to read it, not get a part, but when I hit the twist my mind says "AHHHH so that's what that meant". You weren't too obvious with the topic either and kept it subtle. Rhyming was up and down. Very good in some parts but when you threw in words like fire mid idle / child scheme it threw me off. When your rhyming was on, your flow stayed on too though. A fairly solid drop overall.
MVGT - Follow Your Heart....I mean Godcomplex.
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