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I also struggle with the in depth story technique. So i dont do it. I tell it in a much more metaphorical tone. This week was simply a recount of me sucking my bank dry to feed a gambling addiction via the use of a pub fruit machine. But youll notice if you read it it doesnt come across as your typical story. I spend my energys working on my internals and rhyme schemes as opposed to anything else. At a basic you need a start middle and end but that is very basic anyway. Start by writing down what you want the start to actually say. Then the middle and so on. Then start writing for each section as opposed to just writing from start to finish without structure. Note any clever ideas you want to include but dont be afraid to lose the ones that dont work.
Hope this helps. I felt bad that you feel your reaching out an just getting banter back lol.