timeless, It's nice seeing you make another showing around these parts
your road is an up & down one when it comes to your performances
you quickly shed any doubt that your anything less than an impressive writer
you showcase some interesting ideas from the start of your verse.
the vocab use you apply really makes the read feel less bumpy this time around
towards the end I was impressed that you ended it in the mere moments you started
I'm not disappointed though, you kept me reading...nice work...
Razah, I'm really impressed by you as well, the ability to rapidly pen a verse such as yours is praiseworthy
the flow of your verse makes this a fun read due to you staying consistent in your thought
finding a breaking point and also an ending to your piece in just a compact piece is very idk the word
I've enjoyed this read though...
v/I've gotta say that I really liked this battle because of how short the verses were
both came with an interesting take on their subject matter...
timeless came with a smooth flow, his topic was worded nicely & had impressive ideas
I really thought his verse was cool, but after reading Razah's verse I feel Razah took it
he came with a stronger flow & his build up had a more impacting ending.
dope battle fella's...
v/Razah
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