[Mr. J]

This was a dope battle tbh..

I felt that both of you came correct here, and it's interesting to see the clash in styles

EtH, Your flow stayed on point, and your word use kept the flow moving...
I really felt towards the middle you started to pick up with your verse
the beginning was nice but the second half is where the piece picked up for me
I felt the twist you put on the topic put it a worthwhile read...dope showing..

Spoken, you took a different approach with your piece & it made it dope
keeping the piece in a constant motion by building upon the story as we progress
I really thought your opponent brought a dope play on the topic, but after reading yours I was impressed
you brought a more fulfilling piece as you continue to unfold the whole story
some dope work here brah...

v/I think this was a great battle, one of the closest I've read in most recent days
I felt like both competitors came correct and that both brought a comfortable style to the table
making the read of both topics worthwhile, but I feel like Spoken may have slipped this out of EtH's hands
both had strong showings and this would be my choice for BOTW if anything...
interesting showing from newcomers


v/Spoken