ayo I'll be honest I felt that frank's verse was extra, extra homo. It just creeped me out a little to be honest, and I thought it was just too gay of a verse to vote for. It was like, decent plot and all that shit but I'll be real I wasn't feeling the flagrant fag vibe on this. Could've flipped it way better, and as I agonized my way through the finishing section I felt it got a little jumbled up.
Mr. J came more abstract but I was feeling it more on this one. Some dope imagery then a cool surprise flip. I'm happy to see you delivering some spontaneity with the pen.
The walls become something that starts to fade in the distance
the visions are instant, I'm another being born into another existence
a pilgrim seeking wisdom, dancing the lambs tune...
sheepish & belligerent..what type of rhythm do you dance too?
there's the story of the man who did a jig like a baboon
^cool
living by conquest, over any landscape, the definition of progress.
you can tell by the stripes, the steps I've laid, I'm living accomplished.
in any instant.. you've lost it, that's life, twisted into all this...
with one vision to bring it together before oblivion is brought....
It's time...home is in the distance...that street appears in an instant
I'm another being.....born into another existence...
^dope
Then the cycle continues...
V/ mr. J
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