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I tried last week something a little different and im glad people recognize that it was a start considering my writing in the past but what I tried to do this week was kind of have a set up and a conclusion at the end of every line then each line I was doing a set up which had to do with the topic and then the second line in a bar would be my way of adding a bit of knowledge and wisdom to the text.....I kind of felt like doing that because I have a hard time going from point a to point b in a storytelling kind of way and I don't have the ability to write shit like a rap at all times so this was my way of writing something that I could tackle and really try my best at throwing people off of the topic so that at some points it didn't make sense and there was a reasonable explanation for that...