yay a short battle!
timeless, loved some of your references and their relation to the picture. started off with the mirror one, then you have several bits suggesting trying to turn around and that made me and my stoned things imagine that guy at the end turning back and trying to walk against the grain of his other less evolved lifeforms. in saying that, i feel you could have incorporated the title more, youre predestined angle of it seemed to lack thought imo.
razah. really impressive verse. super cool angle, going through the different eras and bringing it up to the modern era, the stare at the clouds/icloud reference was really cool. then ended it off with how things are now failing. really good concept usage from that picture. thought you nailed this verse
pretty easy decision for me after the read, timeless had a solid verse but razah had a much better angle at the topic which helped him correlate each line with his conceptual progression.
+1 razah
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