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Old 09-23-2015, 05:10 PM   #8
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I liked both verses, both stories. Good shit guys. I'm also not a fan of the "war" topicals, seen so many and that's from my memory of baacckkk in the days.

I may be the odd ball voter in this whole battle, but I think it's pretty close actually. The best part to me about Spoken's verse was the internals. It allowed for me to read his verse very smoothly. Eth on the other hand, I felt like he was more descriptive. I could imagine the story in my head, and that's always a cool thing while reading a verse. For that reason alone, Im'a have to give it to Eth. Good verses from both of you guys, this is simply based on what I preferred more.

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