Ydk had a solid piece with excellent rhyme schemes and excellent wording. There really is nothing i can say about this thats bad although ive seen you pull better and more complex and most importantly more creative schemes concepts and internals in the past. So judging you by you there is room for improvement. Unfortuantly you took the overplayed route and that left me feeling slightly chored by the read once i got so far in. Hmmm i feel like im maybe being harsh but its really nothing to do with your writing because i have nothing i can add as far as improvements go. Its just the content that hampered it.
Nigma you have some of my favourite drops week in week out. I love the subtle metaphors and your internal rhymes multis wording etc usually make your flow mouth watering. I didnt really feel that in this drop... the subtle metaphors were rammed in and the general concept of your drop was nice. I enjoyed the structure of it as well. But the flow was just... a bit bland to be honest. Granted your vocab was excellent as usually but i really wished you had brought your usual smoking flow.
I feel i may have come across harsh in this but thats because i think you both are excellent writers and i think you both had a great piece each. My only issue is that comparred to your usual standards one brought bland content and one brought bland rhymes...
On the more enjoyable read ill go...
Nigma
(Could go either way)
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