lol Godcomplex dope shit bro. I think you maybe rushed this though. Some parts of it like "And all I had to was hand over my badge and gun/But, ingrained in our nature is to be attached to stuff" read as sooo glib to me because you have far more to offer on the subject of spirituality and in this case a sort of zen/buddhist renunciation of attachment than to say something like that. Could've at least flipped it way better or gone deeper with the concept and created dope lines that encapsulate the concept rather than say it outright like that in a sort of novice way. You're better than this.
YDK dope story, you had great emotional content and you have clearly elevated you game. I think it helps that you don't drink as much alcohol as most of us do. That shit gave me some heart turbulence, which is a ggood, good thing. I think the section Adonis quoted was really dope. Don't have much bad to say about this one.
V/ YDK
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