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Old 09-17-2015, 10:32 AM   #12
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This was a cool battle, the story vs the concept piece.
Runnin short on time daughter has a Dr appointment sorry
But I felt nigma edged this because of the ending. Both had some hiccups in wording simples phrasing or flow but for the most part they were strong all the way through. It all really boiled down to entertainment for me and I feel nigma had the stronger more complete feeling at the end. Mr j probably would have beat the majority of of verses this week and if the ending would have been anything other than a reference to seeing the topic directly it would have beat nigma also but as it stands I gotta learn slightly to nigmas verse
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