PP, this was an excruciating read tbh...
I've seen you use a more fitting style to the way you write that compliments you.
you tend to have ups and downs as far as your ideas go, I remember at the beginning of the AOWL you came with a similar concept
bringing stuff like this to the table is alright at certain levels, maybe with the right topic?
either way I know you have the ability to rhyme the smaller words while shooting off tons of concepts
I know...I see you in the cypher..but I would suggest building upon yourself...improve...
don't just with the first idea that pops in your head, for me it's normal to sprout of several ideas before starting a verse...
you had a week to carefully craft a verse that may have blown your opponent out of the water..
which would have benefited you from the start of the new week....
you can write....but you just don't pace yourself to write something new, you don't challenge yourself
it's easy to say "I've done this, I've done that/what do I look like...a dumbass?/bust on butts call it comeback"
anyone can do that...but to say it in a different manner, being capable of providing a different outlook to that is the key
idk I'm rambling now.....just do work breh....READ READ READ! WRITE WRITE WRITE
v/Timeless because he gave me a hard on towards the end of his verse
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