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Old 09-16-2015, 07:57 PM   #7
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Flo some cool lines in there, I have to confess though I hate that spell out a sentence with the first letter shit, don't know why, it just bothers me. It puts the focus on the vertical sentence I guess rather than the content on hand but I thought it was ight. Can see some of Lars' influence. Frank's shit was lol worthy, the usual...creative, funny ending, lol you shitted on them cool. It was better written and had better use of language in general although some of it came off as forced.

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