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Old 09-16-2015, 07:43 PM   #9
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this was a cool battle tbh...


YDK, you came through with a slick verse, one of the best I've seen from you
the flow of the piece is consistent & it never lets up you trailed of towards the end...
buuuut I feel the emotional impact of your verse alone has allowed you to do so.
I enjoyed it because it was more focused than Complex's verse, which is usually tough to do
really enjoyed the subtleties you took this time around, really nice work tbh...

Unborn, I felt like you did a nice job for not putting your all in this verse...
it's nice, but it is missing some of that quality you bring to your verses, I enjoyed the intro though.
as we progress you add more and more to bounce off not using it to it's full extent
I'm unsure if you had time to edit or not but this felt like it could have used some slight work
although I am still impressed, the ending was the boiling point while you started off slow to me..
either way this was decently worked out...

I know that GC was going to back out from the jump of this battle, but I hoped he'd go out with a bang
I'm saddened by the fact he was unable to showcase what had placed him in the holiest of hollies though
although seeing YDK deliver such an impressive yet emotional piece really drives the stake into the coffin so to speak
he came with an impressive piece, and deserves the shine he has achieved here...
nice battle fella's

v/YDK
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