[Ghost1]

this little fuck would have to run and jump to see me im the king ape
got the hammer on deck and i’m unloading barrels like the original DK

Lol played.

i got a rasp and ill split stic in half… but this ain’t woodshop class
this is MF Doom. now your face in that metal…. but it ain’t a prop mask

This is dope.

these comical web tales of you poppin off from the wrist with a weapon?
who’d believe your peter parker fibs. lizman bodied you in a cypher session

Peter parker Web stuff is wild.played....poppin off from the wrist was a fresh twist on it tho...also the lizman tie in was cool....I don't think that's the bad guys name tho? Idk....Imma give u this one. Nice.

who gassed this mother fucker up? on my life i cannot handle this.
you’re the worst murda sho knockoff i’ve seen since CSI: Los Angeles

This is ok....murda sho flips r dumb played tho...even w the relevance I can't dig it.

fuck tha bullshit….

Oh no every1 look out!

no matter what weapons you brandish, you simply don’t stand any chance
my skill is disarming. i won’t just get rid of stic... your whole site’ll leave with empty hands

Disarming played....ttho leave w empty hands was a nice spin on it. I dug this.

ya bitch gives fire knowledge. prometheus. so i cum bust on her lipskin
stic is no match to me… but these violent strikes will make his head combust from friction

BLAT BLAT BLAT

when this kenpo blow to the temple leaves you on your knees doubled over
you won’t have a prayer... but you don’t need one... after this verse you’ll meet jehovah

PLAYED and wack to me.

i’m a living breathing massacre… in my wake is a trail of bodied amateurs
you’ll have dismantled remains in your wake… and a sign that says: “Please No Cameras”

U didn't do nothin here for me



You taking a battle with MFtastick. Got me thinkin you droppin shrooms
You lost to Doctor Dog. What Makes you think you can fuck with Doctor Doom?

DON DEMARCO

Fraze, i'm on to you, show up to one of your poetry jams. loaded 9, splittin' tops
Stand up and cock back, start snappin' in the crowd.. I ain't giving props.

this ain't much

Should I Give him the chopper?, or let the .45 unload clips.
Toss my shooter the colt. full clip tellem hold this
Empty the k, but he still breathin'. i just blew out his whole chest
Now i gotta rely on the fif.. feel like a Chapelle Show sketch

This was a cool segment. I remember the plead the 5th/fif sketch....I fucked w this.

Nigga i got a Gun so big, Puffy dance in the back when i shoot it
And the silencer sound like librarians when dudes in the back actin stupid

Lol wild swag on this.

I got another gun so big... nigga.. I don't even know how to use it
But He get the point when I pull/apple and hit the top of his head. Sir Isaac Newton

Cool....I pull apple isn't that much of a stretch to me....the part that was bad was it don't work both ways....U can't say....when apple an hit the top of his head....it's still cool but could've been cleaner

Your name landed on my desk. so i went to Netcees.. undercover
Knew nothing about him. but it didn't take long to see hes as tough as Usher
Studied this bitch, so i cant believe him when he say he clutch the thunder
Its like Animorphs. So when he turns into an animal, its just a cover.

Another 3 line set up punch. Honestly I'd love to write 3 line set ups for punches.....so I'm really diggin that u did it here........but if u gonna use 3 whole lines in a 16 line battle that punch better be fuckin crazy. To me this shit was not crazy. Wasn't even really good honestly lol.


All in all MF had my favorite bars of the battle.....he threw away alotve lines tho setting up punches that should've been way better then they turned out to be. I'd say MF prolly had the lotb but fraze landed more often.

V fraze