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Old 09-15-2015, 08:54 PM   #15
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mmmmmm

Good way to start the verse. I feel uncomfortable.


I'll open a whole clip. You ain't smashing ur own chick
You ain't EVER Honor Riffic. so that Guns extra polite how it won't Miss

I git the honor/ on her flip....but to say...u ain't ever honor riffic.....that shit like a fuckin robranda sentence lmao. An if honorific is a word i sure as fuck never heard no1 say it. Won't miss was a cool concept....wording was fucked to me.

I question ya livin'.. Don't think for a second you winnin'
If YOU talking bout 38 Snubs, it's just your current Record with Women

This was fire.

The Silencers oldschool Irish. Ain't no singing or blammin'
I'll come thru witha Potato and a Slug. that's without bringing the Famine

Played

We meltdown slugs & reuse straight from the gravel
Them boys got a Frequent Flyer Program. Trust I won't pay if they Travel

Bonkers.

My gun sooo big I can't even carry it round in the streets!!
We call that piece the Microwave. It'll Spin you around with the Heat

Lmao this is like 90s played.

Orc's in the back with the Killer. Ya style is wack & I'm iller
Boy you ain't Great. you Grout, only Covering up Cracks with the Filler

This is nice.

U needa Iron Fist blammin' the Wesson. Cuz Ima bring the Tek in
ya whooole Family can get they Head ina Box. that's the Kazama's in Tekken

Meh. Tekkens gay lol.

Lemme rearrange flows; I'm in ur babe home getting strange dome
Don't Sweater if it Looks Bad. & someone tell SuckaFree to change clothes

Tomahawks thrown!


ZIPEMUP!!!!!

FREE MURDA!!



Orc's been battling for eons, he's got those dated punches that make you hurl
But my writing's the future, so-ma bars feelin' like a Brave New World

I never Google bars....but I felt bad cuz it was ur first bar an I was bout to just say SORRY DIDN'T GET IT.....so I Google this shit hoping it's something really obvious to justify my search....an it's a fuckin reference from a book in the 1930s!?!? Never go ogling another bar again lol. Get the forever fuck outta here w that shit.

Now watch this kid get a loss from me, bet everything's bitten, so honestly
It'd be more fittin' if every written came with a bibliography

This is fire an personal. This connected.

It's like Whose Line when dude rhymes, hell it's almost prophecy
'Cause he's been tryin' Stiles that aren't his, that's what I'm callin' mockery

One of the guys names is stiles I take it? Maybe? Idk....I clicked ur youtube link an had to watch a 30 sec add first then I get to the beginning of a 10 min clip from whose line is it anyway an honestly I almost stopped voting on this battle.

Orc's broad'll flock to me, she texted "Netflix and chill?"
But he's more like Exxon than she lets on, she expected to drill

Played. Wording is clean tho.

And when the weapon's concealed, it's like a couple simulatin' sex
'Cause if I can't put hands on this bitch then we bang-in' techs

I'm not clicking. I get it tho. It's ok...iish.

This classic'll turn to Blackfish if Orc'a get violent
Till-I-come back at 'em and now he's matchin' flows with Poseidon

Orca played on orc....ur flip was ok tho I seen better versions

Catch Orc ridin' to prom, four's on me and I'll pull it soon
It'll stick this Orc-kid in his chest so his corsage is a bullet wound

Same story as above....tho this was a bit better.

And they said you're Irish... so when I'm goin' to grab steel
I'll put a potato on the muzzle for an appropriate last meal

Was played when orc just did it an it's played here....I mean badly played. Every person that ever battled an Irish person has done this shit.



Riffic had a few land but I felt like most of his personal approaches towards orc were played in direction and his generics were awful to me. No hate ...shit was just too obscure or bland. The youtube ideas is a fun idea I guess but it reeks of 90s longbar verses an honestly it took me out of the zone wen I was reading ur shit.....like I'm trynna escape to where ur taking me then all the sudden I'm on YouTube watchin sum bullshit....thought it hurt u.

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