This was brilliant from both. A master class if you will.
Nigma came with an amazing flow and rhyme scheme. It was perfect imo though it got slightly choppier near the end. Just rolled off the tounge. The whole way you kept a constant and fluid reference to the clocks on the hands. Aaahhh i fucking loved this man. Props.
Mr.J. you took a lot more softly softlh catch the monkey subtle route with yours and while i just didnt enjoy your flow as much the theme and consistency throughout was class and something i felt nigma was missing when it came to a consistency of theme. Granted he was consistent in the clock references but the peice seemed less tied in and less directed then yours. This piece here was just fire. Loving the vocab and the subtle clock themed references.
the allure is caressed, devoured, the mouth is drippin' now..
such exquisite taste, such beauty! I think to a distant howl..
the bell tolls for another life lost, and I swing on the pendulum
each second going by, I grow wiser while partaking in the requiem..
gone, in a distant world while the emotions grow further..
life is a bitch but the choices you make just don't concern her..
stumbling back down the rabbit hole I've become distant & rude
bear witness this is how another existence easily concludes...
I dont know how much of this vote made sense guys im writing while sat in a mental asylum with the residents just chatting constantly to me so its hard to concentrate.
Anyway. Close battle but i vote
Nigma
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