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Old 09-14-2015, 07:34 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by JShazo View Post
@The Chef

moderator for netcess? this kids probably been a nerd from the start
check dudes writing, can tell by that pen game ~sharp he's~ a permenant mark
don't like the emphasis on the wp, but this is a straight bar. you would be better off spelling out sharpies. this is a text literate audience.
keep to your own territory, in my zone, no telling who's life the piece'll take
be lying/lion dead if you step outta turf.. this cat can get cecil 's fate
nah too simple. bad setup and wording
word is dude's shady, so im watching this bastard closely
one wrong move, imma put a shell on your back; master roshi
light bar. not really setup great either.
you aint hear? homie i always carry tha pound
aint with the words back n forth, i rather draw sumin like that veritas clown
aight. current events gunbar
trying to make this a classic, hope that you've found ya form
jesus christ, sharp rounds usually go over heads, thats a crown of thorns
this forced to me and light either way
you got him ranked high? why?he writes nothing but filla dawg
think ned flanders wife; big rounds will knock this bitch out the standings... thats how you kill a mod
this was hot. liked the flip

homie, i portray a vet. all my punches stay direct
in these parts, im the gun bar king, i suggest you pay respect
pure filler. dont do this.
dont fuck around and say something you may regret
or i'll have sharp at the end of my gun barrel like a bayonet
nice flip. liked this


Read his shit n lol'd. This dub'll be nuthin, gents.
you dont have that Sweed ish, Chef, cuz your quotes make no fucking sense
wording here is off to me. ok concept.
He's tryna step into the limelight but he'll never hang w/ the best
This fag's getting blocked in a spectacle. I'm the Kim Davis of text
light. could also be seen as a self diss.
I bring a vile attack. Ya bars just wildly whack
You dont just Border Crisis. Your style's fucked as Europe's migrant crap
this is nice to me. some people might not feel it but nice current events flip.
Chef always disappoints on main stage. By the end 16 his verse is in ashes
It's fitting that C-Class is the one with no mileage and only good for crashes
didn't like this. too wordy for a lovetap punch
He wanna step? He'll come up short. I'ma crush him for sport
I'll win for Sherdog. This lightweight's gettin a beatdown worthy of an MMA report
this is simple.
Sharp got gun bars too. For the special event I'm bringing the shotty
Get ready to face the Iron Chef, what I'm cooking will Flay you like Bobby
this is light to me
Tryna fuck with Sharp - there's just no bouncing back bruh
I'ma have your numbers no matter where you go like the NFL's new stat tracker
haha this is dope
LOL @ you beatin me tho. Even your site's starin in reproach
Couldn't Picture your verse destroying me unless you take the Veritas approach.
cool bar but this misses a little bit because of his veritas bar
damn this is a close one to me. i didn't really know what to expect from Chef but im a little disappointed that Sharp didn't come with more because i've definitely seen him drop more fire than this.

Chef had the opener, maud flanders, and his closer. veritas was close but a little too simple to quote. Sharp had the border cross bar and the stat tracker. the closer was close to quotable but his veritas bar defused it a little bit because he basically said he IS planning to take the veritas approach.

sharp you're my homie so i definitely hate voting against you, but i think you would have needed one more bar hitting to take this and unfortunately it isnt there from my reading. nice battle either way, but i got the chef here.

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