Frank did to much. Thats it. He went overboard and lost focus a bit
I feel like the cohesion between each piece wasnt strong at all.
Alone each individual piece is dope is its own right. Put together not
So much. Wasnt feeling the first piece with the chess references.
Felt cold and emotion less. No real poetic voice it read like a non
Rhyming topical. That pretty much ser the mood for me.
Lars you coming along nicely man but thats no surprsie really lol.
This was dope bro very consistent with soft touch of diction and imagery
Enjoy your language and overall candence to your flow, as always your rhyming
Is outstanding mixed with a more poetically tones piece. This was dope.
Vote lars.
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