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Old 09-14-2015, 04:14 PM   #6
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I'm wondering if 2K even tried, at all. Wasn't really feeling none of the verse, at all. What happened here?

Timeless had a decent verse, it was straight.

"Cash has had us since the day I combatted and taxed the havoc."

I liked that line. The rest was okay though, decent flow, good rhyming, some of these rhyme schemes switching up outta no where kinda messed with the flow for me, but still, nothing major.

Eh, I feel like 2000 didn't try, and timeless did enough to beat him. His verse was super solid compared to 2000's.

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