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Old 09-14-2015, 05:45 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by Neighbor View Post
I'ma beat you savage; thanks for the vid, I had to preview that shit
In them cheap New Balance, lookin like Zach Galifianakis hostin Between Two Faggots
funny. but a little light to me.
Pussy, Hammer Brothers are yellow bellied.. I let 'em do their thing
'Til the strap's to their necks & the shell's on they heads give those two squares wings
this is cool. nice flip
Show up on his porch in a banana costume.. the first shot'll split him
I body scrubs w/ a fruit mask; ya face peel at the front door like a Birchbox subscription
nice. shots @ the hipsters
Your gun lines are blunt lies, while everything I write's true to the core
Ironic, you're RMBVA's sole con on camera & look EXACTLY like the Jew from New York
not feelin it
Ya girl be grabbin poles; it's red flags if that slut gets near an erection
Make you watch while I'm puttin kids up inside her mouth & Double Dare you to step in
ok. nostalgia bar.
I need my gear fix; mass nutrition & anabolics that'd have you trippin
You need your gears fixed; to go w/ your man-bun & brand new sixer of Pabst Blue Ribbon
more hipster shots. cool
& Baron said you had gun bars.. well, you can get shot again if you do
How's Zoe Pound in the streets when he thought the Vicelords were a documentary crew?
funny. a little light
Ya shit's played; @Seanz ain't grippin ratchets, I'm cinematic w/ quotes
'Cause after we took his O'Shaughnessy Estate of decay w/ that vintage barrel approach
wording a little off but the wp is nice

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Originally Posted by Seanz View Post
You've done fourteen thousand battles...I wish I was kidding, dude
Just keep texting over and over like..."maybe she's not into you?"
nice concept but i think you misdirected this. this would be fire w/ better wording
You're past the point of "will he know when to pack it in?"
While they try to keep me in the picture like Vigo the Carpathian
light to me
And if ya catch me with ya girl, best mind ya business
She givin' that perfect head like a pint of Guinness
simple but dope
Yeah, kid about the plaid and beard but ya not at all cunning
I'm also strapped with an ox by my side like Paul Bunyan
this pretty cool
And for that gun talk, I'll raise the stock/stalk like a magic bean
I'm no Lars; I'll give you a completely different magazine
haha this ok. magic bean stalk a little corny but the punch made me chuckle. props on the mags tho lars.
I'll kill everyone you know just for thinking you could handle me
Have a chopper ring for years; it's finna open up ya family tree
concept is there but it isn't worded to connect. this comes off forced to me.
I'm the great one with two 9s and you all felt he's Gretzky?
See me with the scope on Neighbour like LB Jeffries
ok association bar. a little light.
Stop talking gutter; you're just someone I get to school
'Cause I've been eatin' off these streets like the 5 second rule
this was nice
This has been one of my favorite reads of the site battle. Both of you guys have bars and brought it consistently in both verses. This is a hard one to call because both of you guys have fresh concepts and flipped them pretty dope.

Neighbor: Hammer Brothers, Birchbox, PBR, vintage barrell
Seanzo: Guiness, Paul Bunyan, magazine, 5 second rule

I have 4 quotes a piece, so I can clearly see this going either way in votes, but I think that Neighbors better use of personals sways this in his direction. The video and the hipster attacks take a little bit away from some of the hood angles in Seanz verse. But can't front at all Seanzo has bars, props to you, I think you would be competitive here. This might just be a case of style preference difference, but feel like Neighbor edged this one out w/ using less generics.

Vote: Neighbor
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