[Frank]

YDK...

Props... Neptune is the planet of Pisces. Had to look it up. I thought you had just put any old planet to describe Pisces, but you remained true to the astrological aspect of it. This was a powerful example of less is more. Those tiny lines packed a wallop. I thought that was cool. I could never contain myself like that. I would rather get the most out of each line, exhausting it off it's possibilities. This is what I would call "Deft". 'Touch my soul' 'Let you down' 'One for the ages' all prime examples and all communicating volumes of depth in tiny amounts of space. Of all the people who chose this picture, you did it the most justice. Nice one.

Innovator..

I wrote to the tiny boots pic also and you did it justice, man. The fox trotting along the trenches was beautiful imagery. I really liked that line and the lines that would follow in it's wake before it would trail into more personal territory. If I remember correctly, you were also in the Marines? Well you went postal here in this poem, bud. You kind of used this type of style in the AOWL - and even earlier on in the NWL - and if memory serves me right, you were not that well received. Well now it seems you're finally in your element, my friend.

Only one verse must win.
I am voting for YDK, but it is close.