Frank..... just thechess game was dope as it is bruh.. even the pyramids. Why the fuck did u do 3??.. shoukd have some how incorporated my man... craftsmanship I must loint was... on all 3 u described a man of his craft and im gonna portray that on you with your writing my man. This shit was bonkers.. the 1440 b.c. was great detail and the content delved with the story.. I didnt like the aladin gest tho.. shit was weird. Bill part was cool too lol his erect weapon penetrating her walls lol typical writer move tbh. Edgar allan poe like bro. My favorite still is the chess game causw u went down and told a whole mstch in detail while painting a vivid picture my friend!
Lars- great fucking style and great aspect of this all. Little tad bit of tree pickings lol to depict the sole planet and echelon of ur writing my friend. The reflection u pit into the tree was dope. The content mde the diction and aspect of this piece advance with out striggle. At ease bruh.
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Frank fuck u man.. shoukd have incorporated these to be ine piece cause this shit judt fucked u in a match lol. Great work but I just felt u cluttered em all into one in hopes of outdoing lars but I think it backfired.... I got lars.