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Old 09-12-2015, 09:43 AM   #13
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Originally Posted by PurelyDef View Post
He's ran through the boards, consider this a change of pace, I am beyond your element
That legend talk irrelevant, these punches'll have Hush changing face like Tommy Elliot

dope, i liked this

These guns Brobdingnagian in range, one shot'll leave an amnion display
See you fucked, when these arms up and the straps around Victor,its not a championship exchange

not bad but im tired of arms & gun bars

See where we differ,I throw punches that'll result in a niggas facial features leaking
You throw punches and insults,staring at another niggas facial features..critiquing

wasnt really digging this one

Like "lets post nice photos, we can write about em" that to me is quite homo
Fuck the personals the wrong thing said'll have me draw on this fruit like the NC site logo

Solid. I had to go back to the site to look at it because that wasnt there the last time i checked lol

Bars, punchlines we both got em, but I'm relentless wit mine that's what sets us apart
His driving record "high as fuck" this a DUI, you came in my lane just to receive a negative mark

Not feeling it

This is either gonna be classic or classified as a murder in the first
Got shells ready to disperse, so when I move the hammer to Hush I'm not bringing order to a court

I like this concept, maybe the wording couldve been a bit more effective but it's solid

I'll have ya chick spread out after she swallow the nine like a pitiful slut
That's not a sexual reference I meant after I empty the clip in her gut

Not digging this one at all. Probably your weakest bar

Feel like I aint been on my shit lately, so I've been fiending to catch a cold homi
Catch em on a stroll probably, its bang,bang,bang when that 40 pops hush like dont tell nooobody

wording could've been a little cleaner but this was still dope

They wanna play em as street, cool I'll be in the cut wit the heat
We'll see how this goof acts when i catch em wit the max like he P.J Pete

ehh this couldve been worded better

This imagery like having a Sig light point blank at his head, result of the view is sloppy
But for yall this situation like a tic bite, I just put the lime through a body.

again, the wordings just a bit off and couldve been better but this is solid


ThAt 30/30 take ya lid off. Leave a njgga in fractions
Then close ya other 3 lids.. Two over ya eyes and one on ya casket

solid opener

even if u stole lines ud still be a wack fuckin pansy
put u in a bag cuz u suck with every bite, thats gushers candy

this would be dope if you actually had evidence of him biting, but posing a hypothetical to make a punch is kind of a reach

It's not a apple watch when I let it ring from my wrist
So when this Mac in my lap let out a round it's not a air book ejecting a disk

Not feeling this.... CD/Round shit is corny

1shot, gun won't "say it again" when I bust mines
No subtitles no slow it downs. When I shoot I make sure u get it he first time !!

This is good

skinny but my 40 cal big, I wasnt meant to fight
spark ya porch up at the slightest motion, the red beam a sensor light

dope

knife work, type of nigga to poke til u bleed
or get holy if I pop at ya chest, rounds on ya neck aint rosary beads

No

Since a kid I turned to the gun. That's megatron
2 nines.. they go off when they around each other like they cant get along

Solid

Big chopper. Run up in ya suburbs and merk ya block
I got a machine to talk to you nerds, thats not urkel bot

Nah

buck 50 to ya grill.. battling me like getting ya jaw shanked
fronting like he brave when these lines in his face, thats indian warpaint

Solid

this aint MK or street fighter, bitch nigga get hit with a semi
this line got ur name on it, clip like ur life bar Im leaving it empty

Kind of a weak closer, wasn't feeling it



this was a solid battle all around. Both sides had some dope bars, but I felt like Shazo stepped it up. He did get a little stale towards the end, but so did Hush. Hush was beating a dead horse with nothing but gun bars, and most of them sounded like some shit I'd see fans posting on a daylyt status in unbias.

The main criticism id have for shazo is your bars are kind of stretched. They'd read cleaner and flow better if you put more effort into structuring your verse.

As far as overall consistency, creativity, and strongest hitting concepts I feel like Shazo got this comfortably
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