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Originally Posted by thatguy
Oh shit we in here. Thought it was a dope way to start this off - and also that this battle was very close and hard to judge
@JShazo
He's ran through the boards, consider this a change of pace, I am beyond your element
That legend talk irrelevant, these punches'll have Hush changing face like Tommy Elliot
had to google and ended up not hittin for me - 1/4
These guns Brobdingnagian in range, one shot'll leave an amnion display
See you fucked, when these arms up and the straps around Victor,its not a championship exchange
so-so flip - 2/4
See where we differ,I throw punches that'll result in a niggas facial features leaking
You throw punches and insults,staring at another niggas facial features..critiquing
I liked the idea here, didn't hit that hard but I still fuck with it.- 2.5
Like "lets post nice photos, we can write about em" that to me is quite homo
Fuck the personals the wrong thing said'll have me draw on this fruit like the NC site logo
I'm guessing this is a punch those guys at NC have probably heard before a few times, but as I don't post there it's new to me. low hanging fruit (no pun) 3/4
Bars, punchlines we both got em, but I'm relentless wit mine that's what sets us apart
His driving record "high as fuck" this a DUI, you came in my lane just to receive a negative mark
good concept, but the wording was kinda awkward - 2/4
This is either gonna be classic or classified as a murder in the first
Got shells ready to disperse, so when I move the hammer to Hush I'm not bringing order to a court
nah man - hammers/court is one of my pet peeve played concepts - plus the thyme didn't work properly for me either. 0.5/4
I'll have ya chick spread out after she swallow the nine like a pitiful slut
That's not a sexual reference I meant after I empty the clip in her gut
meh 1.5/4
Feel like I aint been on my shit lately, so I've been fiending to catch a cold homi
Catch em on a stroll probably, its bang,bang,bang when that 40 pops hush like dont tell nooobody
didn't catch the ref, but flow was nice here 1.5/4 They wanna play em as street, cool I'll be in the cut wit the heat
We'll see how this goof acts when i catch em wit the max like he P.J Pete
not bad 2.5/4
This imagery like having a Sig light point blank at his head, result of the view is sloppy
But for yall this situation like a tic bite, I just put the lime through a body.
I get the concept (lyme disease/tics). It's a decent idea but 'put the lime through a body' is a bit of a stretched way of saying they'll get bodied. didn't work 100% but ill shoot it a 2/4
TOTAL - 18.5/40 - definitely seen better from shazo but he had his moments
@Shush
ThAt 30/30 take ya lid off. Leave a njgga in fractions
Then close ya other 3 lids.. Two over ya eyes and one on ya casket
concept was oook, but awkwardly put together 1.5/4
even if u stole lines ud still be a wack fuckin pansy
put u in a bag cuz u suck with every bite, thats gushers candy
decent concept again, but there is to much goin on in the punch. honestly would sound better if you took out the put u in a bag part. 2/4
It's not a apple watch when I let it ring from my wrist ew
So when this Mac in my lap let out a round it's not a air book ejecting a disk
would have been pretty good if mac/computer wordplay wasn't the most played idea of all time. still sounded nice enough to not get a 0. 1/4
1shot, gun won't "say it again" when I bust mines DNA is that you?
No subtitles no slow it downs. When I shoot I make sure u get it he first time !!
fair enough, but I've heard this idea before 1.5/4
skinny but my 40 cal big, I wasnt meant to fight
spark ya porch up at the slightest motion, the red beam a sensor light
dope 3/4
knife work, type of nigga to poke til u bleed
or get holy if I pop at ya chest, rounds on ya neck aint rosary beads
not bad 2/4
Since a kid I turned to the gun. That's megatron
2 nines.. they go off when they around each other like they cant get along
this is fire! damn! 3.5/4
Big chopper. Run up in ya suburbs and merk ya block
I got a machine to talk to you nerds, thats not urkel bot
not bad 2/4
buck 50 to ya grill.. battling me like getting ya jaw shanked
fronting like he brave when these lines in his face, thats indian warpaint
pretty solid as well 2/4
this aint MK or street fighter, bitch nigga get hit with a semi
this line got ur name on it, clip like ur life bar Im leaving it empty
nah wasn't feelin this closer, but ok 1/4
TOTAL = 19.5/40 - at the start I wasn't a believe, but you really got cookin towards the end.
I'm edging this one to shush/hush/victor w/e his name his, but one punch could have changed it easily. Very close battle. Don't mind my low scoring you both did your thing
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