jilti
heard ur amongst the best ever, one of the Alzheimer's & greats
but after this battle u'll be lucky if anybody remembers your name
All-timers/Alzheimers is a stretch. I see where you were going with this as an intro but the execution was way off. Cool concept.
cuz i'm an exceptionally trained marksman aiming at targets
watch me release clips on Blade like i was changing the cartridge
Another cool concept with lackluster execution. Pretty creative but the wording was off.
then carve his entire family tree ancestry & next of seed really slow
butcher ur whole Evolution Line worse than lars in the pre-mag video
I had to look up wtf this meant lol. This was dope but "next of seed" isn't an actual phrase. I'll rock with it though since it all goes together.
from beginning to close i'll be ahead in this battle & get the win
if Runner-Up in votes, hope son knows that's exactly how its ending for him
Again, bad execution and a lot of filler. Great concept. flawed delivery.
so don't act loco with me asshole. ur all talk til i land blows
because if Aces Wild, you'll see him change after my hands shown
First time that your setup bar has nothing to do with the punch, and it's a shame. That punch was dooooooooooooope.
i'll go reporter shooter crazy, ur crew gonna haul ass once i spray
then we'll see Mic laying on the ground after them bitches run away
You're talkin here. This whole concept could've been done way better.
however some say in text haydays u were standing in the Forefront
ironic, since those are the first set of teeth ima knock out when i throw punch
This concept is dope as hell. Weak execution. Great setup but the punch was ehhhhh.
known thug, tote gun while ya watching tv on the sofa with ur spouse
then blow limbs off til the twitchin stops & your Armrest on the couch
:-/
now lets talk tag tourney where ur one half of The Bad Guys team
but overall you ain't half Bad, just flat out the worst i've ever seen
Had to look this one up. Could've been done better.
so if he claim the throne, a heater'll keep seat warm til ya get home
cuz facts say u ain't a Master Ace, until you sittin' on chrome
:(
All in all, a lot of very creative concepts with bad execution. Also notice a lot of unnecessary vocabulary. Not necessarily filler, but definitely some redundancy in phrasing.
Resin
Aiyyo
Jilt is an MMA faggot.. see this is where that joy ends..
it's ironic how he loves Triangles but his name implies he's loyal to his boyfriend.
:-/
ohh u think u a fighter huh.. maaan that shit's a fallacy..
my left hook'll Faceplant u so hard u'll resemble Groot in Gaurdians of the Galaxy.
Nice. Coulda had less filler but it was just under being "too much".
see me pop glocks.. killin this nerd.. ya know res is the top notch.
bitch ya life is now 'pressed for time' and i'm crushing that stopwatch.
Ok
the berreta's got real power, shells are leavin this nig showered..
i'll put a contract on your head and sign the dotted line with my Sig sauer.
Cool
yousa big coward.. pussy watch me spray the rugar.
paralyze ya.. i'm leavin J in a seated position longer than Edgar Hoover.
Nice
u just a stalker, a stan.. u kevin-c.. ur bars dont have power g..
once he found out he was gon battle me his Initial reaction was to carve ours on a tree.
lol nice but the setup could've stayed on topic (meh@ bars don't have power)
u a born loser homie, everyone'll see me drop this faker..
he's such a Zero when i pushed him it automatically dialed the operator.
NICE
see i'm a rare vet.. fuck ya neckties bullshit, i'll give u a fair set..
how u gonna Hang with me.. i haven't decided to kick u off the chair yet.
Nice
u aint an LA gangsta.. ur in a prude spot with a virgin locale
always askin wyatt a girl for shootin u down.. nigga ur sex life's the ok corral
Nice. I wish you'd used the setup to include a clearer view of the reference though.
i cant believe i just wasted 20 lines, i shoulda stayed snubbin u..
nigga hip hop is a sweet science and u barely a fuckin sugar substitute.
Mahfucka
Nice
Tbh I don't see how Resin doesn't get this. Consistency, concise bars and just overall harder hitting material. Jilti's concepts were top tier material but the execution fell flat in most of them.
Cool battle. Vote- Resin
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