View Single Post
Old 09-09-2015, 01:49 PM   #7
Tic
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,509
Battle Record: 51-29


Champed
- Newbie Tourney VII
- Netcees Battle League

Rep Power: 20137906
Tic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant futureTic has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Amen View Post
Busy - but here...

Fkn irony... How ya name AK but u not a gunna? Lol @ how u'll clap the 9
If gunplay on the agenda, u'll clear ur whole schedule n wouldn even be strapped for time
I liked this first read, then thought...when you're strapped for time, you have NO time. So clearing the schedule/strapped for time doesn't really make sense. I get the connection, but it's loose.
Resin dont want an episode. He better sitcom n watch the llama shoot n blast
..cuz i plan on givin Allen Alda shots and turning his body to a M.A.S.H
Ehh.
Dont need a 6th sense to see the signs famalam, ya boo's a thot.
She knows who i M. Knight, my squad be takin turns like a Shamalan movie plot
Like this.
...i see this asian nigga lurking...i wish his clown ass would move in tho...
So i can give Resident in his skull big enough to rent out as a studio
Dope.
Fuck these dudes, they blow! VETS? HA! We smashin the veterans!
All I’ve noticed; is Res’a wreck any concept from when that faggot was relevant.
Resurrect is a bit forced because it ends with a T. Could've used a better angle, IMO.
& Allen Knight? Ya bars atrocious homie, got nuttin but forced plays,
IRONIC; Judgin his mechanics when he Kia verse, word plays really isn’t his Forte.
Not really feeling the execution.
But If I want something to Snap On, I’ll just read a few of Allen Keys,
But trust when the gun fire, res’a do nothin but get that scraped from his teeth.
I like this.
Ya’ niggas trash, those washed up flows are shit & they’ve plummet!
The BG’s suit you, since readin ya’ verses’ll make ANY voter sick to their stomach.
Ehh.

16, ez.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hush View Post
Aiyyo,

maaaan this is a trot to the finals.. pop open the champagne..
it's a damn shame that ur team's more of a 20 20 joke than a kanye campaign...
Dope.
yah'll will get stomped by us, kicks will cave u dudes in..
faggots if i hit ur bitch ass grill w/ knees any Moai will leave ur face in Ruins...
Like the concept a lot. A tad forced for me, but I still like it.
we knockin biters OUT, originality is somethin a joog needs to strive to.
cuz next time u feelin Salty nigga, it'll just be the scent the medics use to revive you..
Not bad.
i Deadshot niggas in front of 5-0, my lawyer ends the lock..
i beat the Lawton of times, ur snitch ass gets caught & Marksmen for cops...
Lawton is a little forced cuz I would say "law a ton."
it's Res and AK.. u dumbasses kno we dont care to shoot.
when the shotgun blast it'll blow out ur whole back like a fuckin parachute..
Thought this was nice.
i'll spray up amens crib w/ a chopper, its fixin to smash him..
shells leave AWOL stained w/ his body while his soul is missing in action....
Ehh...
yo it'd take the form of shit if yah'll rhymes acquired a shape..
nigga ya career has laddered down to the point it can substitute as a fire escape..
Dope.
& yah'll faggots party at homo bars, that setting is wack..
cuz the type of spots 20/20 Club's at are known for intercepting sacks..
Ehhh.
Idk, I thought this was close....really close. Had to go to a bar for bar breakdown and have AK/Res with the W, but bareeeely. Both had some nice bars and their share of misses. I can see this going either way but I got The Bad Guys sneaking this one in.
__________________
The Outsiders
Tic is offline