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Old 04-30-2013, 02:15 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by IamBenT View Post
Vote -Bags
Played, but the sentiment is at least conveyed. Wouldn't quote, did not deliver roflz. I give this 2 brownie points and a skeeball miss
I should probably quote his whole verse and give a bar by bar breakdown but im a lazy storyteller who doesnt know how to vote.
Sarcasm comes out nicely, though its more passive-aggressive than anything. Probably the best this concept could've been handled but came out quite bitchy. Score for this line: hit by pitch in kick ball and a bowl of campbells chunky
Overall score: 27b/6

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