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Old 04-30-2013, 11:39 AM   #8
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this was pretty good bro, first like 2/3 were just buttery smooth with maybe 1-2 hiccups but the very real and NOW relative content made up for it for sure. the last little bit seemed like it was rushed to be ended but me and you already talked about that haha i have the same problem. all in all though this was a nice piece.. if i get a chance ill edit in some of my favorite line but for the most part i dug it as a whole


@buddah there's yo feed beeyotch lol
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