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okay aye this was definitely the better of the two battles that people showed in this week. I liked the approach of both writers and thought you both had dope ideas and content inside your verse. the thing is I think clutterbuck was a bit vague with his meaning of this girl or something that had an illustrious life or whatever and it was good and followed the theme or whatever but for me I just felt it wasn't very in depth and clutterbuck didn't make enough meaning into her life and what she was supposed to be interacting with in his story.... whereas I enjoyed timeless verse more probably because of the style he used it felt a lot more philosophical and idealogical because he used reason and ideas to scope out his idea also if felt like you could tell a lot of thought and time went into his verse I loved some of the lines even though some of it felt a bit played but regardless it was more metaphoric and well though out throughout his piece and therefore in the end ive got to give the v to timeless...


vote////timeless