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Old 09-01-2015, 03:58 PM   #9
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After deliberation, I'm giving this rakontaur. Purely from a poetic stand point.
His idea was kinda dragged out but stuck to poetry theme a bit better than vulgar.
Numerous quotes, hmmm 'I can piece together last night or move on' 'somewhere else there's a noon' etc.
Really liked the thought process although probably not executed perfectly.

Vulgar deffo had more precise wording n the story ran smoother. The 'british' references filled me with a little pride lol, with a more poetic/ challenging finish, u probs take the win and maybe in another league format u would have aswell.

Enjoyed reading, quality match up, I genuinely scrambled my brain on this one lads, close match.
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