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Ullr
I feel like this was all over the place at times. Great language and imagery
Wjen u had it going. But i feel like it just fell flat in the end for me. Honestly
I loved the middle part of this. I thought you where at your best there.
Mmlp
Man i liked this alot. You made me pictur every scene you wrote to the t
Which tbh is the ultimate for a reader. Dope imagery that was subtle and placed
Very well. I think what i liked the most is you kept going back to the kids which re
Imforced your ehole concept and imagery. Enjoyed this alot.
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