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Old 08-28-2015, 07:07 PM   #12
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No time this week, will be a shorter vote, I apologize, but life happens.

This was a very fun battle, I enjoyed each story for various reasons. Felt Ul had the easier flow and tried to hide it by incorporating more rhymes per bar, but still, the multies were lacking. Ullr had the better imagery IMO, but that closer from YDK and the blood soaked walls was pretty vivid and awesome itself. "My only sounds were a moan" is not correct, either your sounds were moans, or the only sound "was a" moan, if that makes sense. Simple error. Writing a story line verse has always been difficult for me, so when I come across ones I enjoy i may enjoy them more then the next guy. With that said, this was a fairly close bout, but i have to

V/YDK

While both closer were dope, I loved the face being peeled and glass shattering, basically any morbid and twisted visual is pretty sweet, I liked the twist from YDK. So while all things were essentially awash, his twist put him over the top
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