Voting Ullr
Pardon the briefness of this vote. Wouldn't of voted on this - but not mad that I did. Good battle. YDK ends all his verses emphatically. Ullr story telling skills were present and on display, though his mechanics aren't where they need to be to accentuate and magnify his writing. I thought the attention to detail was decent enough, compelling even, and felt up to the minute. I could feel the verse more because of his use of sensory imagery. I felt that YDK didn't fall far from his comfort zone here. Felt like YDK rehashed a familiar verse here.
Voting Ullr
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