hmm reading that vote im a bit confused who I should vote for but I felt like timeless had a few quotables in his verse and definitely wrote a killer verse.... there were plenty of lines in there that I really enjoyed and you seemed to hold your verse together pretty easily.... whereas poet m was a bit difficult to read through I don't think he used enough knowledge in his verse and me personally im not one for punctuation marks and grammer and all that but your verse was a bit messy..... I thought timeless told a story with plenty of good humour and dope concepts... that made the verse for me......so vote....
vote.........Timeless
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