Squad said chill, But there's a lesson he'll learn after eagles burn,
I'm so hell bent on "bustin U-we" all bout to get tickets for Illegal turns!.
I'll punch his face off & my fist will leave his lip full of bruises;
til I'm to embarrassed to post in Amen's Car thread, cos what I'm whippin is Useless.
Why're we even speaking, lets get to the heaters barkin;
Witness'll turn left cheeks, when Machines is talkin w/ Useless body like Stephen Hawking!.
I beat Nik, Bags, Sn00p If that was u, U'd compete & flop;
U ain't even have the upper hand w/ Doh!, U'd only clean sweep a Pizza Shop.
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Un went iiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnn I thought this was a dope verse altogether
but these were the stand out bars for me, and I really enjoyed those punches
the set ups were pretty nice and it was just punch after punch which was great
it really felt like a full battle verse ready to demolish your oppenent at a moments notice
dope shit for real
Fists hit his eye like a tomahawk missile n blow up the place.
Now he's got apache has to wear to cover up the fuckn hole in his face.
U need to keep the real world n txt separate, ppl might've started noticing...
Cause ripping bags off reminded everyone of ur work life sacking groceries.
U been on a tear lately, so I took a look at ur past beatings...
I'm not saying u cheating...
but if it weren't for Victor crews.. you'd be getting over looked more'n the giants last season.
Ur shits played n weak, Imma kill/slay this geek.
I'd put em in a body bag, but bags bodied em last week n took the thrill away from me.
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I felt like these were your strongest points and made the verse worthwhile
I thought that little switch up at the end felt kind of weird but it was still smooth
you made it work into the scheme that you were using and you still got your punches in
some of them I couldn't relate to but I can feel the sting there...pretty cool
more personal without the use of wordplay & slick metaphors..
good job...
v/Unfuk...he had the stronger all around verse...
Useless had a nice verse but was overpowered by Unfuk's barrage of punches
if Useless had the drive & motivation to do the same it would have been a great battle
but one overpowered the other and it shows..nice battle fella's
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