I honestly don't feel so much like voting here and will instead just give feedback to Godcomplex's verse.
Firstly, I loved how you opened this. Real light hearted and conversational like, not over the top with bombarding the reader with information and heavy content. It's a good approach, one I used vs Certain in a previous battle deliberately actually to draw the reader in from the get go - get them immersed - then go into the heavier material later. Deft touch, but I see what you did. And it worked.
Especially as during your PR run they always seemed to nitpick over you being so heavy content wise. It's nice to see you taking note of their feedback and responding to it. It hones your sword. It adds another dimension to your attack and will serve you well long-term.
You're one of my favourites to champ the whole season and in this form I still reckon you'll be there or thereabout.
Very impressive.
Keep that pen moving!
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