V/UnbornComplex, you had the far superior verse here that isn't a doubt
I felt had Razah taken the extension that DrDog offered til 9 this morning he may have come with a thorough verse
these past few weeks may have taken it's toll or you may have had an agenda to tend to you have had better showings
there is no need to write a no show verse knowing you could have penned something in the AM
either way...
You’re asking me to impart a thesis to a kid
But I, a nihilist, neither have a reason to exist
I personify the samsara in the Buddha’s conscious;
Being content with the contents of life is an elusive concept
That defies the entire process of our collective human logic.
Timmy, it is likely your father abused narcotics
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I love the shit out of that, I make tender love right here
then I proceed to fuck your brains out that's what this is...
you have a very smooth pattern that you are using most recently
it shows improvement in putting a lid on the boiling pot that is your mind
you further impress me my friend...
Little girl, don’t feel bad this entire world is an existential trap
Instead of getting caught in the minutia of exponential math
And the differential gaps that come from this line of thinking
Indulge in the realization that our finite minds can listen
To the sounds of this world that can only be described as living.
As for your desire to experience spiritual ecstasy,
It is a miracle of miracles,
That allows women to undergo physical pregnancy
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stuff like this is really dope, I wish you had kept the rhyming up though
that 'thinking' line was a little stutter to me but what follows is clean as hell
I really enjoy how you built up that little moment at the end of this quote
either way there was more to your verse that had it's peaks as well
but this were some of my favorite parts, a very nice showing...good job brah
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