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Old 08-25-2015, 07:48 AM   #11
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just calling it like i see it on my lunch break, sorry its short:

Bags Niks were killer as a team, lot of heat I felt and consistent with it:

We've killed…
Hush with Knux & Orc; funny how u shoot to bag nik
For effort u get an A, Migo… but them friendly fires got you running out of boys to tag with
The mind works in mysterious ways better keep up the pace
ya thoughts of makin a run… for us is a power walk to the finals while u joggin in place
I mean u talkin guns in ya texts don’t make u cool or hard
In the streets no one respects ur salute… it’s like hailin Hitler on Martin Luther King boulevard
blood’ll appear, u disappear then Abracadabra! Ya chick, my bed
I got more tricks up my sleeves… while only laser removal can fix up Cred's
wack bitches get killed cuz when the chrome’s squeezed lives end
if MIGO turns it around its to be pronounced dead… cuz I’ll show u what type of O G I M


that O G I M bar is fire

fuck what anyone else thinks.. that was LOTB to me.. rest was solid

Hush/Cred started off with some serious bars but that shit at the end was absolute garbage, honestly wish you hadnt even posted it because it seemed to take away from how good your first half was:

it takes no effort to beat this dead beat dad.. thats being serious
this win is childs play, something u and ya only daughter never experienced
nik wont update the wack shit he's spitting so its his fate to fail
yea u put ya stamp on every verse, u been txt battling since paper mail
nik face wrinkled as fuck, every day he wake up with more regrets
been thru alot of wear an tear, same shit ur fat ass do to those jordan sweats
the fat guido poor as fuck..everything im saying is real
bags dealing with anxiety.. but selling his anti depression meds aint paying the bills

those were all quote worthy to me, maybe some i felt hit harder than others but they get creative points and the wordings solid enough to sound good lol @ paper mail

two broke bums ridin, now ain't that sumthin
shoot ya head off til it lands on bags lap, u'll die over nothing

i hated this shit, it just sounds like such an old as fuck played idiom shit from 2003 rbl garbage lol

fry ur offsprings wit the banger, shit look like its carried by soldiers
i'll leave ur jr bacon like the only meal u cud afford wen ur daughter comes over

this one was okayish but reallllllllllll easy to telegraph where it was going after "jr bacon" tbh

hated your closer as i said

first half was flames, second half sucked imho

i got bags/nik-a winning this pretty easily

better consistency and a better team who seemed to bounce off each other
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