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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

No need for WD40, all these Guns is new, they'll leave his guts removed;
the Heckler & Koch'll prove his theory true; cos I got FN rounds saved up just for you!
this is ok. lil simple
Squad said chill, But there's a lesson he'll learn after eagles burn,
I'm so hell bent on "bustin U-we" all bout to get tickets for Illegal turns!.
this is close to being nice but the wording was a slight force
I'll punch his face off & my fist will leave his lip full of bruises;
til I'm to embarrassed to post in Amen's Car thread, cos what I'm whippin is Useless.
slight off on the wording setting up the punch. nice concept.
This Bastard's got a job drawin faces for Cops, how's this RAT a rapper?;
He's more like an SNL recruit, But those Sketches are no laughin matter.
nice concept didn't like your delivery
U lack substance, It's no respect for'a 06 texthead that's not close to a vet;
..&U decided to give Neighbor tips bout Online pharmacies, U're not even Dope on the Net!
ok.
Why're we even speaking, lets get to the heaters barkin;
Witness'll turn left cheeks, when Machines is talkin w/ Useless body like Stephen Hawking!.
nice
I beat Nik, Bags, Sn00p If that was u, U'd compete & flop;
U ain't even have the upper hand w/ Doh!, U'd only clean sweep a Pizza Shop.
ok
Ur concepts lack cleverness, it's a bunch of weak scripts in ur pad;
Ironic: last round U took Witty out, with a verse that was a spitting image of that.
ok

Originally Posted by Useless

Aka noquear (yea, seriously)

Wowzerz@ that shit, its a laughing shame.
When u marry a man the vow'll be wrong.. like the 'a' in ur faggit name.
nah
There's nothing I hate more n a fake cop snitch.
Fuck with my Cane n I'm killing 'Able in a way that would make god flinch.
decent concept didnt think the flip was great tho
Fists hit his eye like a tomahawk missile n blow up the place.
Now he's got apache has to wear to cover up the fuckn hole in his face.
liked this
U need to keep the real world n txt separate, ppl might've started noticing...
Cause ripping bags off reminded everyone of ur work life sacking groceries.
ok
Lol @ muff's 10 min key beat this wack geek.
When I call u a fat black pussy, scuz u got bodied by one in the (LLL)eague last week.
ok
U been on a tear lately, so I took a look at ur past beatings...
I'm not saying u cheating...
but if it weren't for Victor crews.. you'd be getting over looked more'n the giants last season.
nice concept. decent wording
Ur shits played n weak, Imma kill/slay this geek.
I'd put em in a body bag, but bags bodied em last week n took the thrill away from me.
nah not really
Ur too soft dog, I feel like I'm attacking a snow man.
read my verses...
..u Palin comparison.. n we hate fuk so much nc joined Bristol's abstinence program.
this is alright

This is kinda like a concepts versus wording thing to me. Unfuk had some creative shit, but I cringed reading some of these. A lot of potential haymakers with wording that was broken to me. Remy's verse was generally a bit lighter in the punch department, but most of it was worded fairly smoothly. I have Unfuk with Stephen Hawking, but I liked Apache and Victor Crews from Remy. Looking at misses, Unfuk definitely had fewer and a lot his bars were near quotable. I could see an argument either way but I feel like I'm leaning towards Unfuk for the consistency. I just really wish you spent a little more time on the wording.

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